Language Arts

Teaching Writing: Structure and Style

Author(s): 
Andrew Pudewa
Publisher: 
Institute for Excellence in Writing
Binding: 
Other
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My daughter, Emily, announced, “The kids’ class [student writing workshop] is much funner than the teacher class.” Scratch that. I am “sure” she said “much more fun.” She was referring to the student writing workshop for Teaching Writing: Structure and Style available on DVD. Implemented by Andrew Pudewa, director of The Institute for Excellence in Writing, Teaching Writing: Structure and Style is a two day seminar where he demonstrates to the teacher/parent how to teach writing skills to school-age children through a step-by-step process. He breaks down the writing process into two basic categories: the structure of writing and style techniques. The structure portion includes both outlines and models of fiction and non-fiction writing.The style techniques are employed to make writing more appealing to the reader and he offers quite a variety. In other words, he teaches the teacher how to teach his/her students how to write in an organized manner that is interesting to read. The step-by-step process is broken down into nine units: 1) Note Making and Outlines, 2) Summarizing from Notes and the Syllabus in Style, 3) Summarizing Narrative Stories, 4/6) Summarizing References & Library Reports, 5) Writing from Pictures, 7) Creative Writing, 8) Essay Writing, and 9) Critique Writing. These nine units are developed over 6 DVDs. In addition, there are three workshops for the students to participate in for a total of 9 DVDs: 6 are instructional workshops for the teacher/parent and the last three are Student Workshops: One each for Gr. 2-4, Gr. 5-7, and Gr. 8-10+. These are workshops. Periodically, he will ask the viewer to turn off the TV and do the assignment. Since these are workshops, he not only walks the teacher/student through the process, he also reads the completed assignments of the class or student as well. This offers the viewer an idea of what they are seeking to achieve as an end goal. This is an excellent way to show the teacher/parent how to present guidance to the student when learning how to write. To help the viewer understand the program, crucial information is found in a Seminar Notebook that is loose leaf papers clipped in a binder, so you can add additional information and notes. This includes detailed notes, charts, outlines, checklists, models of sample student writing, and a syllabus. During the class, he points out the page numbers for you to follow him. His target audience is for teachers of children from grades 2-10; however, even adults would benefit from the program in creating more clear and concise writing with interesting stylistic techniques. He opens the first DVD with background information about the Teaching Writing: Structure and Style program, he then provides an overview of the program before he launches into his first lesson. Each unit builds on the previous unit. With humor and interesting stories, he holds the viewer’s attention. Because of the great number of hours, the teacher/student should not try to cram too much information too quickly in order to finish the program. Going back to my opening line, “scratch that,” one of the points of the program is that the student should write in pen. Instead of erasing, the student is encouraged to write on every other line and cross out the errors and write the correction above the corrected word, phrase, or sentence. This is one of many tips that will make the writing process much easier for many students. While some parents may balk at the price, they need to consider the value of the program. It is a two day seminar and it includes workshops for the student as well. Even if the teacher/parent were not to follow the program exactly, there is a wealth of information that is shared that would be helpful to the teacher/parent and student. For example, some teachers/students may be attracted to the structure portion of the program and others to the style portion. They can pick and choose what works best for them. While it is a highly organized program, with check off lists, and a specific way of doing things, it is a program that is easily adapted. Because it is a workshop format, instead of a lecture series, by doing the exercises, the teacher will have a greater understanding of the student’s position when learning how to write, especially the potential frustration that usually builds up and the need to allow adequate time for a good essay to develop. Andrew Pudewa imparts a wealth of knowledge and teaching tips that can be applied to other areas of teaching. For example, once something is mastered by the child or “easy” for him/her to do, then he/she should move on to the next step. One of the beauties of the program is that the teacher/parent does not have to come up with new writing ideas, the teacher/parent can use the material the student is already studying in history, science, or religion or the teacher can use the suggested assignments in the program. Although Mr. Pudewa stands at the front of the classroom, he is not in any way a mere talking head. An engaging speaker, he knows the joys and the pitfalls of teaching and shares his practical knowledge with the viewers. He knows the secret of a good teacher: He interacts with the students. While my daughters periodically popped in and out of the room while I was watching the teacher DVDs, they purposefully on their own accord (Gosh, are they my children) decided to watch the student DVD, took notes, and did the exercises. They were quite proud of their finished products. No wonder they liked it more than watching the teacher portion. Because of the vast amount of information, I have only given a brief overview of the salient points of the program. If you visit his website, you can click on a youtube demonstration where he outlines the benefits of the program. On youtube, there is also a sample from one of the DVDs, but the constant pausing interrupts the flow of his presentation and makes it difficult to watch. Teaching writing to children, or to anyone for that matter, is one of the most difficult tasks for a parent to do. It really shouldn’t be. But we are overwhelmed with all the grammar rules and the memories of red ink dripping all over our student essays once upon a time. Andrew Pudewa gives teachers/parents a highly structured alternative to teaching children how to write. He does so in an interesting manner, showing students both how to organize their papers and do so with stylistic techniques that greatly improve interest. His goal is the goal of all good writing, to make it both interesting and meaningful. Before you give up on trying to teach your child how to write, consider Teaching Writing: Structure and Style by Andrew Pudewa.
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First reviewed: 
1-10-2009

The Bears on Hemlock Mountain

Book cover: 'The Bears on Hemlock Mountain'
Author(s): 
Alice Dalgliesh
Number of pages: 
64 pages
Copyright: 
1953
Publisher: 
Aladdin Books
Binding: 
Softcover
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Jonathan must go over Hemlock Mountain alone to borrow a large iron cooking pot from Aunt Emma. Jonathan's mother is preparing a meal for a cousin's christening party, and his father is very busy with springtime chores on the farm. Jonathan is concerned that he will cross paths with a bear, but he is reassured that there are NO bears on Hemlock Mountain. His adventure includes a visit with small woodland animals on his way up the mountain, a snack and nap at Aunt Emma's house, and an encounter with some large woodland animals on his journey back down the mountain. Some quick thinking provides a happy ending as Jonathan and his family discover that there really ARE bears on Hemlock Mountain.

Based on a tall tale described by the State Archivist for the state of Pennsylvania, this delightful story about an eight-year-old boy will appeal to boys and girls alike. The use of repetition and a rhythmic sentence structure make the story an excellent choice for a read-aloud for any age group. It is also suitable as a first "chapter book" for a newly-independent reader.

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First reviewed: 
12-7-04

The First Whole Book of Diagrams

Author(s): 
Mary Daly
Number of pages: 
196 pages
Copyright: 
1999
Publisher: 
Ye Hedge School
Binding: 
Spiralbound
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Perspective: 
Catholic
Additional notes: 

The Complete Book of Diagrams is the public school version of the original diagramming book. It does not contain references to God. That version is available from the Riggs Institute.

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First reviewed: 
1-29-2008

The Institute for Excellence in Writing

Book cover: 'The Institute for Excellence in Writing'
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The Institute for Excellence in Writing, owned by a Catholic convert and home school father, teaches the "structure and style of writing" through live and video workshops. This program is used throughout Canada. As do other programs IEW teaches structure (organizing material for writing) so that the final written piece will be logical, but unlike most programs children are trained to do this by using the writings of good authors. The structure of writing is taught by having children read literature, outline the literature, narrate from their outline, then write their own piece. This eliminates the problem of what to write about and gives the child a "feel" for the flow of good writing. The first of the 5 videos shows the parent how to teach outlining and the beginnings of style. Style, that which makes for a sophisticated sentence as opposed to a "Dick and Jane" sentence, is not taught by most writing programs. IEW teaches style by providing children with a checklist of things that should be included in their writings. They are taught to include strong verbs, to change the part of speech with which they begin their sentences, to include clauses, and many other things all of which is taught in a systematic way which the child can easily grasp and remember because they have the checklist next to them. My children enjoy this program and have made great strides in their writing. This flexibility works in favor of individual differences, but figuring out a schedule was challenging at first. Unlike the Writing Strands program, IEW requires a good deal of parental involvement, especially in the beginning. The 5 video tapes can be rented for $80 or purchased for $130. While the initial outlay for IEW is more than other programs, it is the only one you need to teach writing through high school. This program teaches style and structure for: non-ficiton, critical essays (book reports), narratives, creative writing, writing from pictures, research reports. The IEW forces the child to write better sentences and use more descriptive words, which adults who read a lot tend to do naturally.

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First reviewed: 
1998-99

The Little Apostle on Crutches

Book cover: Little Apostle on Crutches
Author(s): 
H.E. Delamare
Number of pages: 
86 pages
Copyright: 
1911
Publisher: 
Catholic Heritage Curricula
Binding: 
Stapled Softcover
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The Little Apostle on Crutches by H. E. Delamare is the story of young Willie– almost nine–whose cheerful goodness touches the lives of everyone he meets.

Through his many adventures, he always strives to do what is right, making him an excellent role model for younger children. For example, he faces persecution from another boy who covets his newspaper corner. Yet, he treats the other boy with continual kindness.

Willie is unique in that he is not afraid to share his faith. When asked about the family's financial difficulties, he replies..."'We're Catholics and that helps one so much, doesn't it? It keeps one contented and happy–and teaches one to bear one's troubles.'"

Because the book was originally published in 1911, there is a quaint old-fashioned flavor to some of the language. However, this never interferes with the meaning of the story. For example, as a complement, another boy says of Willie, "'You're a bully little chap, anyhow!'"

A short 86 pages long, The Little Apostle on Crutches is republished by Catholic Heritage Curricula. Although the story would be a great a read aloud for any age, the reading level is 3-6 grade. This paperback has no illustrations, but you do not miss them.

Update from webmaster, March 2024: It appears that CHC is no longer printing this book. However, you can click here for the Internet Library copy of The Little Apostle on Crutches or find it from a variety of sources who reprint public domain works.

Perspective: 
Catholic
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First reviewed: 
1998-99

The Little Bear Treasury

Book cover: 'The Little Bear Treasury'
Author(s): 
Else Holmelund Minarik
Number of pages: 
189 pages
Copyright: 
1960
Publisher: 
HarperCollins
Binding: 
Glued Hardcover
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This treasury incorporates the stories Little Bear, Little Bear's Friend and Little Bear's Visit - sweet stories from the "I Can Read" series of the 1950s and 60s. Little Bear is a walking and talking bear who makes friends with other animals and a girl named Emily. The stories involve humorous adventures and stories told by Little Bear's parents and grandparents. The stories involving Little Bear and his mother are especially sweet and portray some of the simple questions and worries of childhood. Another family favorite.

Additional notes: 

Copyrights 1957/1960/1961

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First reviewed: 
11-15-2000

The Magic Tree House Series

Book cover: 'The Magic Tree House Series'
Author(s): 
Mary Pope Osborne
Publisher: 
Random House
Binding: 
Softcover
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In this series, 8 year old Jack and his 7 year old sister Annie travel to a different time period in each installment. The series begins with Dinosaurs Before Dark in which Jack and Annie find a tree house that has mysteriously appeared near their home in Frog Creek, Pennsylvania. In the tree are lots of books. In one particular book, Jack and Annie see scenes of various places and time periods. At the page of the dinosaurs, they say they wish they could go there. Then, presto-magic, the tree house plops down in the middle of dinosaur time. They explore the dangerous land are helped to return to the tree house by a friendly pterodactyl. The whole experience is completely mysterious to them (how did we get there, who owns the tree house), but they have one clue: a medallion with an "M" on it that they find on the grass.

In subsequent installments they find out that the tree house is owned by Morgan LeFay of King Arthur lore. She is a librarian for Camelot and travels about collecting books. Each time the children enter the tree house they take off on another adventure. Every four books in the series deals with a theme or problem that the children have to solve.

  • Books 1-4: meeting Morgan and finding out what she is all about.
  • Books 5-8: finding clues and artifacts that will release Morgan from a spell cast by Merlin that turned her into a mouse.
  • Books 9-12: solving riddles to pass the test to become Master Librarians.
  • Books 13-16: saving books from four ancient time periods that would otherwise be lost forever.
  • Books 17-20: rescuing a mysterious dog that is under a magic spell.
  • Books 21-24: finding 4 special kinds of writing for Morgan's library in order to save Camelot (something to follow, something to send, something to learn, something to lend).

Jack and Annie are good foils for each other in the stories. Jack is cautious and reflective, always taking notes about the things he sees, or reading about them. Annie is more adventurous, jumping right into the action of the time period. For a few of the books, Mrs. Pope's husband collaborated with her to write non-fiction companions. The books are short enough to not be intimidating for new readers and interesting enough to keep them wanting to read more. My boys love them and read the new titles that come out even though they are much below their reading level now. They are intrigued by figuring out the kid-sized mysteries.

Some Christian groups have banned these books because they deal with magic. I did not find the use of magic offensive. There is no spell cast in the stories; we just hear that Merlin cast a spell. In fact, I thought it was kind of quaint and cute that Morgan LeFay is cast as a librarian.

In some of the stories, Jack and Annie have to learn about the religious or spiritual aspects of the time they have landed in. So, in Night of the Ninjas, they have to act out the Ninja way in order to make it through the forest without being caught by the bad guys (use nature, be nature, follow nature). In Buffalo Before Breakfast they have to imitate the ways of the Indian. This may cause some people some concern, but my children thought of it as merely historically interesting. The stories incorporate some vital historical information about the time period in which they travel, which Jack is always stopping to write down. This includes the religious beliefs of the people. When they travel to Pompeii to rescue a book, Jack reads from a research book about Ancient Roman times, including gladiators, the forum, public bathes, and myths of the gods and goddesses.

One thing I was concerned about was that occasionally in the stories Jack says about Annie's lack of caution, "I'm going to kill her." I was hoping my children wouldn't start saying that! And they haven't. One thing I wish they would imitate, though, is Jack taking notes or looking things up all the time.

These books are a good 2nd grade level reading bridge between just learning to read and harder books that can be tackled in 3rd grade. They are purely for pleasure reading!

Additional notes: 

approximately 70-80 pages each

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First reviewed: 
2-18-04

The Phonetic Zoo

A Self-Teaching Spelling Program (Advanced level)
Book cover: 'The Phonetic Zoo: A Self-Teaching Spelling Program (Advanced level)'
Author(s): 
James Webster
Andrew Pudewa
Publisher: 
Institute for Excellence in Writing
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The Phonetic Zoo is an auditory (CD) based spelling program that includes at each level 5 Audio CD's (540 rule-based spelling words), 47 5 ½"x 8 ½" flashcards teaching the most important spelling rules and similar set of 2 �" x 3 5/8" (illustrated) zoo cards, an introductory DVD, and a pamphlet that explains the basics of the program.

Each lesson begins with the speaker reading the rule followed by a 15 word list that includes the speaker repeating the rule every three words. After each word is presented, the student is given enough time to write down the word without feeling rushed. The word list is repeated along with the correct spelling. The student writes the correct spelling next to his word as an accuracy check, noting which words he misspelled. He then studies those words and listens to the same list (CD track) on subsequent days until he correctly spells all list words two times.

Upon first listening to the CDs I thought the program moved too slowly and that my children would find it boring. I was pleasantly surprised to discover that I was wrong. In retrospect realize that I found it slow and boring because I already knew the words, but for a student just learning the rules and word spelling it moved at just the right pace.

Phonetic Zoo provides different rules from Spelling Power that were quickly learned by our oldest child (who is not naturally a good speller.) At the beginning of eighth grade (after completing Level H in Spelling Power) he worked through the entire Phonetic Zoo high school level in 3 months and was able to apply the spelling rules in his essays. We did a follow up test to the effectiveness of Phonetic Zoo by using the final Spelling Power lists. He missed less then 5% of all words on the last two levels of Spelling Power, and the words missed were rated as being college level. For our family Phonetic Zoo is an ideal program for older students who are yearning for independence and are anxious to "be done" with spelling lessons. This review is of the "Advanced" level of Phonetic Zoo. The IEW website contains an auditory placement test that is accurate in determining which level to purchase.

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First reviewed: 
12-3-01

The Trivium: the Liberal Arts of Logic, Grammar, and Rhetoric

Book cover: The Trivium: the Liberal Arts of Logic, Grammar, and Rhetoric
Author(s): 
Sister Miriam Joseph, C.S.C.
Number of pages: 
292 pages
Copyright: 
2002
ISBN: 
9780967967509
Publisher: 
Paul Dry Books
Review: 

This little gem was used as a freshman college course after the author met philosopher Mortimer Adler and understood the importance of teaching basic language skills as the foundation of other learning. After some years of study, she put together this course in the Trivium, the three language arts – of word relations (grammar), concept relations (logic), and composition (rhetoric). The result is a primer in Aristotle's Categories, a demanding course in logic, and a prerequisite to good composition. It is not, mind you, a course in grammar conceived as the study of commas, periods, and subjunctive verbs, though it might lead to insight into these matters. Not is it a course in "symbolic logic", the modern logic stripped of thought and studied simply as a form of mathematics. Rather, Sister Miriam offers a prerequisite to philosophy and writing, for this is a course in clear thought and the right use of language.

With all this, The Trivium is demanding, yet it is very accessible. Despite its original use as a freshman college course, it reminded me very strongly of my high school logic text, which, like this, was the work of an obscure nun who had studied Aristotle and wanted his clarity to form the minds entrusted to her care. I look forward to the opportunity to use it at the high school level.

Not only is the volume accessible, but one must delight in its literacy. The illustrations are taken from the great literature of western culture – so the mind is always lifted. It is a pleasure to read, and study is always rewarding, because every step sparkles with beauty and interest as well as clarity. Many of Sister Miriam's examples were originally taken from great literature; her loving editor Marguerite McGlinn has taken the liberty of replacing those illustrations which were time-bound with even more good literature so as to move the book into its rightful place as a timeless resource.

For those who know and love Dorothy Sayers' little essay on the trivium, it may be appropriate to warn that this is not in any sense a resource for primary or middle school children.

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First reviewed: 
10-4-02

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